Response to Feedback of Paper 2

Today we received our paper 2 drafts back. We were able to see what Ms. Lang liked and didn't like with our papers. I was extremely pleased to see more highlighted parts that underlined parts, meaning that my paper was on the right direction. The things i need to work on, as explained by her remarks, is that i need to add more detailed facts about my magazine, specially my article. For instance, when i write about the pictures in the article i have to explain how the layout it, how the images are displaced throughout the article, the use of color in the pictures, etc. However, i also have to get more in depth about the style of the magazine and specially the style of how the article its written, understanding who the article was written to.