Peer Edit for Paper 2

After todays peer review i started to be doubt my essay. I didn't know if it was good enough, or better said if it was written well enough. However, i came to conclude that that is how i write and thats the way i express my self. I know it is complicated and confusing but thats why FSU has the english  writing center so student can clean up their essay. I know my writing is confusing sometimes because i get to many ideas at once so the outcome is a paper with very different thoughts but i don't think i need to change the way i write for others. I know my english writing skills aren't the best, but thats why i know I'm not a English major. However, i know that my writing offers a distinctive perspective than others. I don't chose or i don't try to write like everyone else because i find that boring. I like to write how i write because thats how i enjoy it. I could write like everybody else but thats too main stream and i feel ill just be following, which i don't like to do. One thing i will change about my paper is the clarity of the sentence structure. I think the more i write the better i will get. Before our first paper i haven't written a formal paper since December of senior year so I'm not shocked to know that my writing is bad. Although its been a while since i wrote a paper it shouldn't be an excuse. However, i like the peer editing but i find it that even though u get good response from your peer editor they don't know the way you write. I believe that each person puts their own spin in how they write their paper so its hard to tell others what to write when they believe in writing a paper in their own style.