Movie Narrative Peer Editing workshop

The peer editing workshop today help me understand what direction i want to go with my essay. Before i had a little idea of what i wanted to do but didn't know how to express it. I understand that the only way for me to keep on going is by understanding what i want this paper to say. I started thinking and concluded that during each of my eras something important rose and became a part of my life. The peer editing was extremely useful in understanding the point i want to betray in the essay and how to bring it into the essay.