Movie Narrative Intro and Conclusion

Writing my narrative introductory paragraph was single handedly one of the hardest paragraphs for me to write. I though about starting with a quote or maybe a little story of me as a young boy watching my favorite movies, but none of them seem the best way for me to start my essay. So as we were taught i wrote my first shitty introduction and kept on going with my paper. After we did our peer review I went back and rewrote my introductory paragraph. Now i knew what i wanted to put in the introduction and what stuff to take out. My introduction now starts with a strong statement about how movies affect us. By starting with a strong and capturing statement i hope the readers would get hooked to the essay and want to keep on reading. My conclusion was written three times. I couldn't get it to be how i wanted it until the three revision. In the conclusion i don't answer the statement but i summarize the statement i made in the introduction about movies. Its almost like i proof that the statement about movie is true. I do believe my conclusion answers the "So What" question that the book arises.