The peer editing was extremely useful since i wasn't in class on Monday. I was able to get another person response to my paper instead of the same person over and over. The one thing i might change about my paper is that in stead of focusing on multiple movies i might focus on just one movie and go more in depth on it. By going into a movie i would be able to get more details and examples that relate to me. Also i am going to change how each show created a new view toward the world. And how this new perspective prepared me to the world.
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